Been asked to write a 100 word blurb, any thoughts?
“OnlinEvents broadcast live to the internet and record to view later on our website, on DVD and as a download. Nothing can ever replace being in the room with other people, but there isn’t always the time or money to attend in person, so we make events available live online. It’s not enough to just view the event from a distance so we utilise chatroom technology allowing communication with the facilitator and other delegates. And if you are not available on the day of the event? We record so that you can view on our website, on a DVD and if you prefer, download to your computer.”
I like the blurp. All that needs to be in there is there.
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Few grammar and punctuation issues but I like the content :)For example you have a question mark on the end of a sentence that isn't formatted as a question.
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